Transition of Thoughts

Weaving thoughts into words

Journey of life

Journey of life

The train chugged along

identical tracks, but the

surroundings kept changing


The journey of life

and death is the same for all

but people encountered are different


Linking to dVerse Challenge: Poetics – Exploring the realm of Minimalist Photography


The day she was waiting for..


100 word fiction: In the woods


  1. This is so true, as well as evocative and universal. Love how you used the photograph and how you made it a metaphor for life and death. Beautifully done.

  2. Excellent. We are all on different paths to the same destination.

  3. We follow straight lines, unaware of their circular journey, eating its own tail, where the end is but the beginning–again.

  4. Powerful brevity piece. The tracks of similarity in our lives, but the landscapes as varied as those around us on earth.

  5. Nice metaphor!

  6. sanaarizvi

    This is such a powerful response to the challenge- I agree, the journey of life is the same but we go about it in our own unique way and harbor our own perspective. Thank you so much for writing to the prompt

  7. To the point with an aura of eternal meaning. Minimal photos, as well as, your poem. Bravo!

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