Transition of Thoughts

Weaving thoughts into words

Left at the altar

Left at the altar

We loved each other

to the moon and back but you

left me at the altar


We promised to be

by each other’s side but you

left me at the altar


We had some lovely

times together but you

left me at the altar


What started as joy

turned into depression as you

left me at the altar


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  1. A very sad scenario for sure. Great job on the repeats. It drives home that the loser left you at the alter!

    • transitionofthoughts

      Yeah it was a horrible situation for her to be in :(.

  2. Very heartbreaking.

    • transitionofthoughts

      True that. Her worst nightmare had come true quite sadly.

  3. definitely heartrending. the repeated lines felt like daggers, pouncing again and again.

  4. like the sad echo of a bird –

  5. A sad story, made sadder in the repetition!

    • transitionofthoughts

      Thanks Ingrid :). Yes, definitely horrible times for her :(.

  6. Over and over and over again, it hurts.

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