Flashy and rigid
on the outside, soft and calm
on the insides
As I cut it, I
visualize the power and
strength it symbolizes
Linking to dVerse Challenge: Poetics – How to Cut a Pomegranate
Flashy and rigid
on the outside, soft and calm
on the insides
As I cut it, I
visualize the power and
strength it symbolizes
Linking to dVerse Challenge: Poetics – How to Cut a Pomegranate
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Truedessa
Enjoyed your dragon fruit haiku
transitionofthoughts
Thank you 🙂
Lucy
I love how you explicate the dragon fruit’s beauty, along with its inner strength. Appearances aren’t always what they seem. Very well-written!
transitionofthoughts
Oh yes that’s quite true. It has always seemed like an intriguing fruit to me :).
Sakshi Raina
Beautifully written, it’s interesting to see how you gave characteristics to a dragonfruit 🙂
transitionofthoughts
Thanks Sakshi :).
Ingrid
It is an eye-catching fruit, for sure!
transitionofthoughts
Oh yes it definitely is :).
kim881
How delightful, a second helping of dragon fruit. I love the way you describe it as flashy and rigid on the outside, it is so astonishingly lethal-looking and, yes, powerful and strong.
transitionofthoughts
Thanks Kim :).
areadingwriter
ahhh! I agree. it feels like cutting a dragon and getting the galaxy, right? well done!
transitionofthoughts
Hahah true :). Thanks for stopping by :D.
Shawna
“As I cut it, I
visualize the power …”
Perfect. I’m pleased you did such a unique fruit.
transitionofthoughts
Thanks Shawna :).
Sunra Rainz
Lovely haiku and accompanying image 🙂
transitionofthoughts
Thank you 🙂
Helen Dehner
Good for you and beautiful too!! I love the speckled inside of the fruit … I have only had them a few times but now I want one!
transitionofthoughts
Oh yes its definitely quite different than most fruits out there particularly in terms of its appearance :).
anotherkatewilson
Cool!!!
transitionofthoughts
Thanks :).
jewishyoungprofessional
A concise and powerful poem!
transitionofthoughts
Thank you :).