As I look back, I
keep wondering whether he
really loved me
We started as friends
in school, chit-chatting away
for hours on end
He always made it
a point to do what he could
to see others smile
He always went out
of his way to impress me
or so I observed
With time, we became
inseparable and went
together to college
While initially
things continued as-is or
so it was looking
Something was not right
as cracks started to appear
between both of us
Quarrels were part and
parcel of our lives as we
began to grow apart
And then one day he
just left me for someone else
without any remorse
Linking to dVerse Challenge – Poetics: Exploring the Narrative Voice
kittysverses
Nice take on the challenge. 🙂
transitionofthoughts
Thank you :).
kittysverses
You are welcome. 🙂
Ingrid
I like how you have given us an insight into the jilted woman’s feelings here. A sad story, well-woven, and a great response to the prompt!
transitionofthoughts
Thanks Ingrid :).
Beverly Crawford
You captured well the journey of two people growing apart, the rejection and sadness of facing the ending of a long relationship. Well penned.
transitionofthoughts
Thanks Beverly :).
Rob Kistner
Excellent, so well written.
transitionofthoughts
Thanks Rob :).