As the flood of light inundated the
room through the translucent window, he felt
a rush of energy only to have
his stomach in knots at the thought of the
approaching cyclone which was enough to
scathe them leaving a ton of damage behind.
Linking to Ragtag Daily Prompt: Translucent, Fandango One Word Challenge: Inundate, Your Daily Word Prompt: Scathe, Microblog Monday, dVerse Challenge – Quadrille #124
Mish
It would put my stomach in knots too. I like the contrast in your poem.
transitionofthoughts
Thanks Mish :).
vishalbheeroo
The words pain and makes one feel numb at the loss. A mark of great imagination, writing and based on real incidents.
transitionofthoughts
Thanks Vishal :).
Susan St.Pierre
How fluid are our emotions. Joy and despair are never far apart. Nice!
transitionofthoughts
That’s so true. Thanks for stopping by :).
Raivenne
Whoa! What a way to swiftly change from calm to chaos in 44 words. The quiet before the storm indeed. Well done.
transitionofthoughts
Thanks :).