Transition of Thoughts

Weaving thoughts into words



He seemed shocked at what

all he had been forced to see

in that crazy house


Those greenish yellow

eyes told a thousand words as

he kept staring on


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  1. loved the idea we are forced to see so much.
    loved this

  2. The things that we wish could be unseen are the ones that we see the most.

  3. This would also have been good for the witness prompt.

  4. Hahaha, you’re describing my pets for sure. Makes me feel for them. Great poem!

  5. Probably better off he can’t tell us……hahaha

  6. If those eyes could talk and let us know….good one.

  7. Cats may be shocked, but they are never judgemental!

  8. It’s true, that cat does look as though it really doesn’t understand what it has been forced to watch.

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