Transition of Thoughts

Weaving thoughts into words



As it rained, delight

turned to despair seeing the

flood and landslide


While he was deft, he

lost control of his car which

ended up crashing


Linking to Ragtag Daily Prompt: Delight , Fandango One Word Challenge: Landslide, Your Daily Word Prompt: Deft, dVerse Challenge: Poetics 428 — Poetry as witness


Din of screaming voices


100 word fiction: Remembrance


  1. That’s so tragic. Yikes! 🙁

    • transitionofthoughts

      Yeah driving during heavy rains is generally quite a challenge. But he ended up in a tragedy :(.

  2. The thin line between delight and disaster (which we so often forget) – so well done in this little gem of a piece. Thanks for sharing.

  3. What a tragedy!

  4. Heartbreaking! In so little words you conveyed the sad picture so perfectly.

  5. sanaarizvi

    My goodness 🙁 that is indeed tragic!

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