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100 word fiction: Edge of Universe

Edge of Universe

There’s a planet at the edge of the universe not unlike the earth in landscape and atmosphere. But its inhabitants are not.

They are robots who have been programmed to act and respond as per certain scenarios. While they are also programmed to emote like humans, their emotions seem anything but natural. Over the years, the amount of goods consumed on this planet has increased ten times.

There is speculation that the merchandise there is carried across the vast swath of their planet by planes just like on Earth. People remember to label it correctly so that its not lost.

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15 Comments

  1. Another planet like earth would make it a mess. Feels like future Earth, is it?

  2. Sweta

    Wow. What an imagination of another Earth. You have a flow with 100 words!

  3. What an inspiring piece of micro-fiction. I hope I’m able to weave a story out of so few words some day.

    • transitionofthoughts

      Thanks Sinjana :). I am sure you can. It’s always fun to test yourself as a writer by express in as few words as possible :D.

  4. Nupur | Practicalmum

    another earth, with inhabitants hurtling towards their doom… just like our own!? Nicely done.

  5. That is very good imagination actually!!! Liked this piece.

  6. Human imagination is really fascinating! And I have always admired your imagination

  7. Nice and concise. I fear that wherever humans may go, they will screw things up.
    ~Cie from Naughty Netherworld Press and Readers Roost~

    • transitionofthoughts

      True that, we humans do end up spoiling a lot of things wherever we go some intentionally while some others not so much.

  8. Who knows! There could be an alternate earth with robots on the other side of the Universe. 🙂 I liked your imagination, Aseem. Thank you for joining #fictionmonday. Hoping to see you next week also. 🙂

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