Sun and the clouds were having a tiff
with the sun trying to win the battle
Clouds weren’t ready to take it lying down
and both decided on a face-off
Eyes jealousy
Grey life
Pale heat
Pellucid quest
Solitudes wish
Inspired from “The pale Impromptu” by Samuel Greenberg
Linking to Poetics: The charms of Samuel Greenberg
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Truedessa
Smiling this was a delight to read the battle of light and dark. I guess they could compromise partly cloudy or partly sunny.
transitionofthoughts
Yeah they ended up compromising eventually ;). Thanks for stopping by :D.
msjadeli
The lines naturally flowed for the battle. Nicely done.
transitionofthoughts
Thanks Jade :).
msjadeli
You are very welcome.
Laura Bloomsbury
a loose and light evocation after the heaviness of Greenberg – thank you for joining the prompt
transitionofthoughts
Thanks Laura :).
Shalzz
This is how you express so many emotions in too few a words! Brilliant.
transitionofthoughts
Thanks Shalini :).
Jhilmil
Loved reading this small narrative!
transitionofthoughts
Thanks Jhilmil :).
jaya1966
Lovely lines. A battle between two powerful forces of nature described beautifully.
transitionofthoughts
Thanks :).
myworldwitheira
Nice lines…!
transitionofthoughts
Thanks Seema :).
jainnehas
Just a few words. Deeper meanings. You are really great with it. Nice post.
transitionofthoughts
Thanks Neha :).
Aarti
pellucid quest-wow !
transitionofthoughts
Thanks Arti :).
vidhya29
Wonderfulll!!! I am loving all your posts with such prompts!
transitionofthoughts
Thanks Vidhya :).
Tina Sequeira
An interesting take on sun and clouds. The poem is lucid. #MyFriendAlexa #TinaReads
transitionofthoughts
Thanks Tina :).
Haimanti
You express so well with such less words… Keep on writing…
transitionofthoughts
Thanks :).