Transition of Thoughts

Weaving thoughts into words

Sun vs Clouds

Sun vs Clouds

Sun and the clouds were having a tiff

with the sun trying to win the battle

Clouds weren’t ready to take it lying down

and both decided on a face-off

Eyes jealousy

Grey life

Pale heat

Pellucid quest

Solitudes wish

Inspired from The pale Impromptuby Samuel Greenberg

Linking to Poetics: The charms of Samuel Greenberg

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White Sands


Grey turns to blue


  1. Smiling this was a delight to read the battle of light and dark. I guess they could compromise partly cloudy or partly sunny.

    • transitionofthoughts

      Yeah they ended up compromising eventually ;). Thanks for stopping by :D.

  2. The lines naturally flowed for the battle. Nicely done.

  3. a loose and light evocation after the heaviness of Greenberg – thank you for joining the prompt

  4. This is how you express so many emotions in too few a words! Brilliant.

  5. Loved reading this small narrative!

  6. Lovely lines. A battle between two powerful forces of nature described beautifully.

  7. Just a few words. Deeper meanings. You are really great with it. Nice post.

  8. pellucid quest-wow !

  9. Wonderfulll!!! I am loving all your posts with such prompts!

  10. An interesting take on sun and clouds. The poem is lucid. #MyFriendAlexa #TinaReads

  11. Haimanti

    You express so well with such less words… Keep on writing…

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