Transition of Thoughts

Weaving thoughts into words

She was there

She was there

He laid awake and said the name into the night. He was making noise by hitting the ark. She was obdurate even though it may have seemed asinine to anyone. While he was honest, her medium sized tricks were enough to illude and if caught to elude others.

She never looked at the arc of life through a prism of right and wrong. And then she was there. He tried to scream but couldn’t.

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Linked to Ragtag Daily Prompt: Prism, Fandango One Word Challenge: Scream, Your Daily Word Prompt: Obdurate, First Line Friday, Saturday Mix – Double Take, Stream of Consciousness Saturday: Medium, Sammi’s Weekend Prompt: Asnine




What had he been searching for?


  1. That’s quite an interesting way of storytelling for the one word prompt.

  2. practicalmumnupur

    love the interpretation of the prompt! Keep writing..

  3. Poignant story telling!

  4. It is a great post.

  5. That was beautiful. Such a succinct and crisp Description, loved it

  6. Sounds like he invoked something that would have been better left alone.
    ~cie from poetry of the netherworld~

  7. Blogaberry Foo

    Wow this was pretty short and sweet. Keep these kinda blogs coming!

  8. Ashvini Naik

    Loved the interpretation of the prompt!

  9. Very nice and well done on all counts (and challenges).

  10. Interesting take on the prompt. Short and crisp:)

  11. Brilliant take on prompt, I like the theme on word challenge, looking forward to read more.

  12. Neha Sharma

    That’s an interesting take on the prompt, short & crisp, loved it.

  13. That’s such a clever interpretation of the prompt. Loved the he-she story writing way.

  14. Short, crisp & intriguing story telling. Keep writing!

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