Transition of Thoughts

Weaving thoughts into words

The walk

The walk

The group which was slowly walking towards the building had synchronized themselves by now. It was a peaceful walk without any malice whatsoever where they just wanted to make their point heard rather than pelt anything around. But in such situations to ensure everything goes smoothly, Master Crime Fighter was always around.

He knew that his presence was enough to make others shiver and do things the right way.

The walk

The authorities had just moved to the new building and were just setting up the furniture when they saw the group and were left wondering on the way they would respond.

Written for the photo prompt and you can read the other entries here.

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56 Comments

  1. Is it enough to make your point heard if nothing changes?

    • transitionofthoughts

      I guess many a time it does take a lot to make ones point heard and make the changes. I believe that the effort ultimately does get rewarded though it may take time.

  2. Nicely done, thanks for sharing your thoughts with us.

  3. I think this is a pretty clear picture of how frustrated everyone feels right now.

  4. What is coming next….what we are all wondering…and how we can be the change we wish to see in the world. Thank you for joining us this week as we wind our 100 words

    • transitionofthoughts

      We all definitely need to be the change we want to see. Thanks for the lovely prompt :).

  5. Hooray for our side! Interesting.

  6. A timely piece for what’s going on now.
    Be well … Be Safe
    Isadora

  7. Interesting story. I wonder about this crime fighter.

  8. If the crowd is conditioned to know it will be harmed and chooses peace that is a mixed blessing to me. Peaceful protest is supposed to work, but from what I’ve seen, I have my doubts.

    • transitionofthoughts

      I can completely understand what you mean. I still believe though good results are possible but they do take quite a while than what would actually be intended.

  9. A demonstration of helplessness, it seems.

  10. Is there a sequel to this? Was it peaceful because the people meant it to be so or because of the presence of the master crime fighter?
    Just curious!

    • transitionofthoughts

      In the end it was peaceful because the people wanted it to be that way. The crime fighter was there just to ensure that nothing goes awry.

  11. Sweta

    I always count on his blog. Ravishing photo prompts. Interesting read about crime fighter. Also your book Dread did leave an impact on me

  12. With the ways things are now, people want their voices to be heard. The story is very relatable to present situation.

  13. Such a crisp & apt write up for a photo prompt. Superb

  14. Now that’s a perfect response to a photo prompt. And eventually it ended peacefully

  15. Ultimately, a super hero is required for protection! Seems we all need one too! Very interesting take on the prompt.

    • transitionofthoughts

      I guess the times we are in, we all need superheroes in some shape or form for eg: like the essential workers who are keeping us safe. Thanks for stopping by :).

  16. That’s a nice take on teh photo prompt. This reminded me I should restart the FFF soon.

  17. I love writing to photo prompts too! This ond left a lot yo the reader’s interpretation.

    • transitionofthoughts

      Thanks Sona :). Yeah photo prompts are always fun especially since they do well to keep the creative juices flowing :).

  18. I am glad that they didn’t turn into an unruly mob. Makes me wonder if it was just because of the Crime Master’s presence!

    • transitionofthoughts

      Yeah he was there to ensure things don’t get out of control :D.

  19. Nice take on the photo prompt. Peaceful demonstrations can be effective too.

  20. That’s a nicely done prompt. Thank you for sharing.

  21. Photo prompts are always hard … What a beautiful and intriguing piece you have written up..

    • transitionofthoughts

      Thanks :). Yeah as a writer, its always fun to challenge oneself :D.

  22. An interesting tale indeed, Aseem! Often, crowds are provoked to misbehave. Good, they had better sense to choose peace over violence. #MyFriendAlexa #TinaReads

    • transitionofthoughts

      And that’s why the crime fighter was there too :D. Thanks for stopping by :).

  23. andd this is interesting!!!

  24. That’s a brilliant take on the prompt, we all need one super hero given the current times!

  25. Really interesting.

  26. Thats a lovely take on the photo prompt. Even I love to share my perspective on photo prompts.

  27. the story serves its purpose to leave reader realise the current mood of all that is uncertain.

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