Transition of Thoughts

Weaving thoughts into words



Being early August, the first signs of light were there at 6,

Though it was difficult with the weather being hot and humid.

But this was the time to walk out and go brambling in the fields

And get back those fresh juicy berries home.

Linking to dVerse Challenge Quadrille #108: Among the Brambles



Story of her life




  1. “brambling in the fields” oh what a joy! love the verbing of bramble!

  2. sanaarizvi

    May I just say that this is absolutely …. DELICIOUS! 😀

  3. Exactly, when it’s cool and there is dew on the berries. I like the way you used brambling as a verb here.

  4. I like the image of brambling in the fields.

  5. Ooh, the imagery is gorgeous. Lovely piece!

  6. I like the way you start with “being” – it takes us straight into the moment. Works very well.

  7. Love this journey.

  8. Beverly Crawford

    One has to dress for brambling … jeans and long sleeves are wise! Love the word play!

    • transitionofthoughts

      Haha I quite like that. I think jeans and long sleeves would be perfect for the weather :).

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