The dark secrets of
fear hidden in the inner
recesses of his mind.
The loneliness
had begun to gnaw at him
little by little.
Linking to MTB: Imagism revisited
The dark secrets of
fear hidden in the inner
recesses of his mind.
The loneliness
had begun to gnaw at him
little by little.
Linking to MTB: Imagism revisited
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msjadeli
You’re able to describe an approaching watershed moment in a person’s life well.
transitionofthoughts
Thanks Jade :).
msjadeli
You’re welcome.
Frank J. Tassone
“dark secrets of fear hidden…”
“loneliness that had begun to gnaw…”
Piercing images, accomplished through metaphor. Well conveyed!
transitionofthoughts
Thanks Frank :).
poetrybydebi
That “little by little” is very telling and trying
transitionofthoughts
Thank you :).
vishalbheeroo
The words are intensely deep and expressing with sensitivity what a person undergoing depression goes through. It pushes us to think before we ascribe label!
transitionofthoughts
Thanks Vishal :).
rogblog666
well done for sharing this. important piece for those who have not experienced this to find out what it like to.
transitionofthoughts
Thanks :).
Laura Bloomsbury
the verb ‘gnaw’ is so well chosen
transitionofthoughts
Thanks Laura :).
D. Avery @shiftnshake
The last line, “little by little” is a very effective almost ominous closing.
transitionofthoughts
Thank you :).
memadtwo
I hope he has someone to call! (K)
transitionofthoughts
I hope so too.