PHOTO PROMPT © Rochelle Wisoff-Fields
“Hey, you there?” He had been knocking on her window for a while.
“What are you doing here? My parents could be here any minute.” She was shocked seeing him.
“I wanted to thank you.”
“For what?”
“For your lovely smile when you looked at me through the rear view mirror of your car. That was what I needed on my way to the interview.”
“You need to get going or we will be caught.”
And suddenly, he felt that he was gliding in the air only to fall on the ground with a thud as the ladder gave way.
Linking to Ragtag Daily Prompt: Rear View Mirror and Fandango One Word Challenge: Glide
Written for the photoprompt and you can read the other entries here.
Aahana Aggarwal
Nice post!
transitionofthoughts
Thanks :).
Mister Bump UK
it sounded like he didn’t glide very far
transitionofthoughts
Haha he surely didn’t ;).
bushboy
The last lines made me laugh. Thanks for joining in Aseem 🙂
transitionofthoughts
Hehe thanks :).
msjadeli
Lovely slice of life there. Nicely done!
transitionofthoughts
Thanks :).
msjadeli
You’re welcome.
crispina kemp
Love it! 🙂
transitionofthoughts
Thanks :).
animar64
I love an uplifting, or you know a thud to the ground love story 🙂
Anita Marie
transitionofthoughts
Hehe thanks Anita :).
ahtdoucette
Sounds like the start of possible love, provided he survives the fall. =D
transitionofthoughts
Hehe yeah an interesting start to the love story definitely ;).
Sandra
I think he’s been brought down to earth. 🙂
transitionofthoughts
Haha quite literally ;).
granonine
I’m wondering if her father was behind the unsteady ladder 🙂
transitionofthoughts
Haha the father did hear the guy falling but before he could come out, the guy had managed to flee ;).
granonine
Well, at least he wasn’t badly hurt.
transitionofthoughts
True that :).