Transition of Thoughts

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100 word fiction: Ladder

100 word fiction: Ladder

PHOTO PROMPT © Rochelle Wisoff-Fields

“Hey, you there?” He had been knocking on her window for a while.

“What are you doing here? My parents could be here any minute.” She was shocked seeing him.

“I wanted to thank you.”

“For what?”

“For your lovely smile when you looked at me through the rear view mirror of your car. That was what I needed on my way to the interview.”

“You need to get going or we will be caught.”

And suddenly, he felt that he was gliding in the air only to fall on the ground with a thud as the ladder gave way.

Linking to Ragtag Daily Prompt: Rear View Mirror and Fandango One Word Challenge: Glide

Written for the photoprompt and you can read the other entries here.

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21 Comments

  1. it sounded like he didn’t glide very far

  2. The last lines made me laugh. Thanks for joining in Aseem 🙂

  3. Lovely slice of life there. Nicely done!

  4. I love an uplifting, or you know a thud to the ground love story 🙂
    Anita Marie

  5. Sounds like the start of possible love, provided he survives the fall. =D

    • transitionofthoughts

      Hehe yeah an interesting start to the love story definitely ;).

  6. I think he’s been brought down to earth. 🙂

  7. I’m wondering if her father was behind the unsteady ladder 🙂

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