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100 word fiction: Lovestruck

100 word fiction: Lovestruck

I want to forget those days but I can’t seem to get over her. It seems that she is still here with me walking hand in hand by the beach.

We happened to meet by chance in a restaurant where she had come for a business meeting. When we got talking, we realized that we had so much in common and a friendship quickly bloomed. Soon enough, we were besotted with each other so much so that I had surrendered myself to her charms.

But when she suddenly passed away, I was only left with our photographs and my loneliness.

Stream of Consciousness Saturday

Written for Pegman Prompts venturing to Rhode Island, USA

Linking to Ragtag Daily Prompt: Surrender, Fandango One Word Challenge: Photograph, Stream of Consciousness Saturday Prompt: Want


Photography: Pastime


Ten Word Story: Company


  1. The depth of the emotion in this — both love and loss — is a wonderful match for the beautifully dramatic image that you found.

  2. Such a short snapshot of a story but full of emotion.

  3. I feel like this quite often so I relate to your writing. Very poignant.

  4. I agree — this is well told and very poignant.

  5. Great take, like where you took your inspiration. So sad!

  6. Beautiful story. So much emotion. Great stuff.

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