Transition of Thoughts

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100 word fiction: Help

100 word fiction: Help

“Nick, push it up. Push it way up”

“I am trying Ben. But this damn thing isn’t responding.”

The cockpit was a cacophony of alarms and it was extremely difficult for the pilots to hear each other as the twin engine jet spiraled out of control and headed straight for the neighborhood of Rodwood.

Luckily, the pilots found a road to land the plane. But it still clipped a few light poles and cars finally coming to rest near the mayor’s home. Almost immediately, the air was filled with cries for help with passengers staggering out of the burning wreckage.

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10 Comments

  1. Ohh my God, that’s sad. Thanks for linking up with #FridayFotoFiction

  2. Phew! Glad they avoided the crash! Good one, Aseem!
    Thank you for writing for #FridayFotoFiction

  3. pythoroshan

    Nice take on this. I went an entirely different way with the same prompt.

  4. Short and crisp tale… Liked reading it πŸ™‚

  5. This left lot of questions .. good one πŸ™‚

  6. Great tale you weaved around the prompt. I still have some questions about it though.

  7. A scary little tale which is nicely weaved.

  8. sushmitamalakar

    Your blog, after so many days Aseem! And now I realised what I was missing in my life! This is a super scary post you know. But I have always been a fan of your fiction. Stories told so beautifully! πŸ™‚

  9. Love your fiction writing style Aseem Rastogi

    Cheers
    MeenalSonal from AuraOfThoughts

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