Transition of Thoughts

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100 word fiction: The keys..

The keys to your home door

“Please don’t do this. I beg you. I am sick and tired of this torture.” She could only murmur as he locked her and took the keys away.

The man whom she called ‘father’ had sexually tortured her and her sister for years. He had kept them in an underground cellar hidden from the world including their mother. They always wondered whether their mother had even tried searching for them.

At first, they tried to fight their way out of his clutches. But slowly they resigned themselves to this fate hoping that they rather face death than be his toy.

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  1. Wow, very concise and a great story. I could feel the pain of the abused child in that story.

  2. Chilling story especially its so often the truth in todays times!

    • transitionofthoughts

      Thanks :). Yeah sadly these days such things incidents have become much more common than before. Or maybe if you see another side, a lot of them are now getting reported. More than ever.

  3. Very powerful. There are all too many people living this truth. One is too many.

  4. Horror story .I hate child abusers .They are the worst sort of human monsters

  5. Aseem you have shown a story that is seen everywhere today. often said that even the blood relations will not untouched in this ‘kalyug’

  6. OMG the thought of this is so painful. But unfortunately there’s no dearth of such sick people on this earth. Thanks for linking up with #FridayFotoFiction

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