Transition of Thoughts

Weaving thoughts into words

55 word fiction: Ethereal #AtoZChallenge

She was beautiful..

She was beautiful..


Whenever he saw his friends with their respective girlfriends, all he could do was curse his luck. Despite the looks to die for and the intelligence anyone dreams off, he had always met women who were chasing his money.

And then, he found her. Her ethereal beauty was enough to swipe him off his feet.

I am participating in the A to Z challenge in April  and the theme I have chosen is Micro-fiction

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  1. Archie

    good one 🙂

  2. Great job! I like that word. It’s not one I get to use often, since I write children’s fiction.


  3. And they lived happily ever after…

    @yenforblue from
    Spice of Life!

  4. So glad that his wait paid off 🙂
    A wonderful take on letter ‘E’
    Keep writing!

  5. Ethernal .
    Nice take …
    Appreciate the way you explained it.

    @dixita011 from
    Cafenined words

  6. Wow Aseem….I am not surprised that lovely image evoked these beautiful words from you!
    @KalaRavi16 from

  7. finally, the wait was worth it!

  8. Nilanjana Bose

    Good choice for E. Well-done on keeping up to date with posts.

    Here from the A-Z,
    Best of luck with the challenge


  9. Novemberschild

    If something beautiful reminds you of something ethereal, then it must be love.

  10. inGeniousty

    Oh who is she? I think I know her 😉

    E- Power of Expectation

  11. Okay I want to know more :p this seems like fiction inspired by reality

  12. Good one! 🙂

  13. Good that it was worth the wait. 🙂

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