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Five Sentence fiction: Comeback #AtoZChallenge

United against all adversities

United against all adversities


“These guys seem to play the game ‘without their brains’.” A former player himself, he had made a name in the world of commentary over the years with his insightful analysis and forthright views.

But little did he know that his sarcastic comment would rekindle the fire in their belly and they would rise from the ashes like a phoenix.

There was a time when they were labelled as mercenaries who ran behind money rather than having pride in representing their country.

But they came back from being labelled as a bunch of no-hopers to being world beaters by using all the negative talk as a motivational tool in an us against the world scenario.

I am participating in the A to Z challenge in April  and the theme I have chosen is Micro-fiction

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  1. that was a smart reply by Sammy to Warny, he had the last laugh and how!

  2. Been seeing such scenarios since long, right?
    Hmm.. thought for the day! Happy AtoZ!

  3. Wow! So dig that sentiment! Fire in the bellies that drives them to unthinkable heights! Amazing what you can convey with a few lines Aseem!
    @KalaRavi16 from

  4. Ummmm
    Wells written ,
    Yes people work for money making instead of representing country .

    @dixita011 from
    Cafenined words

  5. RamyaRao

    Reminds me of this quote : Beat revenge is massive success. Well written.

  6. Nicely done Aseem. A lot of times things like this happen, don’t they?
    Reema D’souza from
    Reem Writes…

  7. inGeniousty

    Haha seems to me like Shane Warne and the West Indian team 😛 esp Marlon Samuels 😀

    C- Can I?

  8. Bouncing back after a steep fall is the best comeback 🙂

  9. Arlee Bird

    Slick wordplay.

    Arlee Bird
    A to Z Challenge Co-host
    Tossing It Out

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