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100 word fiction – Anger #AtoZChallenge




“Those who get angry are the ones who love you the most.” She had always heard this advice from her loved ones. But there was only so much that she could bear.

The marks on her body and soul were a true reflection of the torture and pain he had inflicted upon her. From failed business deals to fights between friends; from knowing about her numerous guy friends to her frequent refusal for sex, she ended up bearing the brunt of his anger.

What started off as a match made in heaven truly ended as a match made in hell.

I am participating in the A to Z challenge in April  and the theme I have chosen is Micro-fiction

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  1. Sad to read, good work from you!

  2. Great start to the A to Z Challenge!

  3. Gosh! That what anger does to people. Sad .

  4. Archie

    Anger is pathetic, isn’t it? Good luck for April Aseem 🙂
    I’ll write mine soon… do hop over ok… 🙂

  5. CM

    Your last line sums up the thought so well .. Heaven and Hell perhaps are a place on earth .

  6. That’s a deep thought! Loved it! 🙂 I can completely relate to this!

    Ashmita Chatterjee,

  7. Great micro fiction. Good luck with the rest of the challenge.

  8. The last line just pierce my heart away. You have precisely put on the words that longed for change.

  9. A powerful piece to start the month. Sadly a common situation even if we don’t always hear about it.

    Keith’s Tiny Tales! My obscure word today is absquatulate

  10. Amazing first post 🙂
    All the best for the challenge!

  11. Anger is a natural and mostly automatic response to pain of one form or another (physical or emotional). Anger can occur when people don’t feel well, feel rejected, feel threatened, or experience some loss. The type of pain does not matter; the important thing is that the pain experienced is unpleasant. Because anger never occurs in isolation but rather is necessarily preceded by pain feelings, it is often characterized as a ”secondhand” emotion.

  12. Anger ruins even the best of relationships right? Nicely written.
    Reema D’souza from
    Reem Writes…

  13. Ohh, so sad! Anger is such a momentary yet destructive feeling isn’t it! Great start to the challenge! Will be back soon for more….cheers 🙂
    @KalaRavi16 from

  14. I did that the last time I did A to Z (100 words/Drabble). It’s challenging and fun, as a writer, to really get to the meat of the story with no waste.

    Liked this. I’ll be back.


  15. Good start of the Challenge. Summing up her entire life in 100 words. Well written

  16. Just getting into microfiction myself. Nice piece.

  17. Anger is one of the reasons for a strained relationship. A good start to the challenge Aseem. Do visit my post at PonderingTwo

  18. Anger is one of the reasons for a strained relationship. A good start to the challenge Aseem. 🙂

  19. That’s sad! 🙁
    But, beautifully written. Happy AtoZ! 🙂

  20. I love your short fiction. It always has a take away. Good luck with this challenge Aseem 🙂

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