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“Those who get angry are the ones who love you the most.” She had always heard this advice from her loved ones. But there was only so much that she could bear.
The marks on her body and soul were a true reflection of the torture and pain he had inflicted upon her. From failed business deals to fights between friends; from knowing about her numerous guy friends to her frequent refusal for sex, she ended up bearing the brunt of his anger.
What started off as a match made in heaven truly ended as a match made in hell.
I am participating in the A to Z challenge in April and the theme I have chosen is Micro-fiction.
Alok Singhal
Sad to read, good work from you!
aseemrastogi2
Thanks Alok. Nice to know you liked it 🙂
Cheryl Wright
Great start to the A to Z Challenge!
aseemrastogi2
Thanks Cheryl 🙂
Parul Thakur
Gosh! That what anger does to people. Sad .
Archie
Anger is pathetic, isn’t it? Good luck for April Aseem 🙂
I’ll write mine soon… do hop over ok… 🙂
CM
Your last line sums up the thought so well .. Heaven and Hell perhaps are a place on earth .
Chaotic Soul
That’s a deep thought! Loved it! 🙂 I can completely relate to this!
Ashmita Chatterjee,
chaoticsoulzzz.wordpress.com/
miladyronel
Great micro fiction. Good luck with the rest of the challenge.
Shalini
The last line just pierce my heart away. You have precisely put on the words that longed for change.
Keith's Ramblings
A powerful piece to start the month. Sadly a common situation even if we don’t always hear about it.
Keith’s Tiny Tales! My obscure word today is absquatulate
fabulus1710
Amazing first post 🙂
All the best for the challenge!
Novemberschild
Anger is a natural and mostly automatic response to pain of one form or another (physical or emotional). Anger can occur when people don’t feel well, feel rejected, feel threatened, or experience some loss. The type of pain does not matter; the important thing is that the pain experienced is unpleasant. Because anger never occurs in isolation but rather is necessarily preceded by pain feelings, it is often characterized as a ”secondhand” emotion.
Reema D'souza (@ReemaMichelle)
Anger ruins even the best of relationships right? Nicely written.
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kalaravi16
Ohh, so sad! Anger is such a momentary yet destructive feeling isn’t it! Great start to the challenge! Will be back soon for more….cheers 🙂
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StuHN
I did that the last time I did A to Z (100 words/Drabble). It’s challenging and fun, as a writer, to really get to the meat of the story with no waste.
Liked this. I’ll be back.
Stuart
https://stuartnager.wordpress.com/
Seeya
Good start of the Challenge. Summing up her entire life in 100 words. Well written
kellygriffiths
Just getting into microfiction myself. Nice piece.
Rohan Kachalia (@rohank01)
Anger is one of the reasons for a strained relationship. A good start to the challenge Aseem. Do visit my post at PonderingTwo
Rohan Kachalia (@rohank01)
Anger is one of the reasons for a strained relationship. A good start to the challenge Aseem. 🙂
Shalzzz
That’s sad! 🙁
But, beautifully written. Happy AtoZ! 🙂
quirkywanderer
I love your short fiction. It always has a take away. Good luck with this challenge Aseem 🙂