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Five Sentence Fiction: Waves

Are these waves dangerous?

Are these waves dangerous?


“Covering all the exotic surfing hotspots in the world is surely part of my bucket list. The adrenaline rush while riding a wave cannot be replaced by anything else.”

Being an adventure freak all his life, Ron loved taking challenges head on. And this rush to take up challenges is what cost his life.

As the waves started to get bigger and stronger, he missed his balance, fell into the rough waters and began to drown before he could even realize what was happening.

Written for Five Sentence Fiction Prompt: Waves. Read the other entries here.

Linking to NaBloPoMo (National Blog Post Month – June – My post no 9 for this month.

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  1. Just five sentences and you capture everything. Amazing

    • aseemrastogi2

      Thanks Ruby :). It’s surely quite a challenge to capture a lot in so few sentences. Glad that you liked it :D.

  2. Forum

    Wow I so agree with ruby. Keep it up

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