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100 word fiction: The toy store..

The toy store..

The toy store..


“Daddy, I really love those toys which my friends play with. Can we please buy them as well? I have always seen them buying from this store.”

Katie, Brad’s daughter was a sweet little kid all of 4 years who had brought happiness and joy to their family after years of trying for a child. Her happiness and joy was all that mattered for her parents.

While he always ensured that he inculcated the right values and ideals and made her learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age, fulfilling all her wishes was his most important priority.

Written for the photo prompt and you can read the other entries here.

Linking to NaBloPoMo (National Blog Post Month – June – My post no 10 for this month.

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  1. This is such a heart touching write up

    • aseemrastogi2

      Thanks Ruby :). Happy that I was able to bring out the emotions between Katie and her dad.

  2. In a time where the children have started demanding, Katie seems to be a gem 🙂 Lovely story.

    • aseemrastogi2

      Thanks Vinay. Nice to know you loved it :). Welcome to my blog :D.

  3. To spoil or not to spoil? Well done!

    • aseemrastogi2

      Thanks Yolanda :). Our love makes us spoil our children a bit ;). Welcome to my blog :D.

  4. There’s nothing wrong with spoiling a child as long as she gets love together with the toys. Which seems the case here, lovely story.

    • aseemrastogi2

      True, in the end it was all for love :). Thanks for dropping by.

  5. i like how you packed so much family emotion just through one photo. great take on the prompt.

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    I think every parent cherish and feel privilegetp have a kid and that are able to fulfil every wish they have and even ensuring that they are brought up correctly

    • aseemrastogi2

      Yeah along with fulfilling their kids wishes, parents need to always ensure that their children have the correct values and manners. It’s about striking the correct balance between the two :).

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