Transition of Thoughts

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100 word fiction: At the portico..

At the porch..

At the porch..


As he stepped out onto the portico to feel the first rays of the sun after the harsh winter, he couldn’t help but remember the fun times he had spent with family.

Every weekend, the Smith’s put out the chairs on the portico for some sweet little family time over a cup of coffee, biscuits and a few exciting games. While the oldies engaged in some interesting conversations about life, the youngsters were busy in their fun and games.

The lovely lush green surroundings were like the cherry on the cake as they added a natural element to the place.

Written for the photo prompt and you can read the other entries here.

Linking to NaBloPoMo (National Blog Post Month – February – My post no 8 for this month.

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Five Sentence Fiction: Abuse


The time for love..


  1. The verandah has that feel about it that in days gone life lived on it.

    • aseemrastogi2

      True Irene, the moments spent on the portico remind one of the amazing times gone by. Thanks for stopping by :).

  2. Was it all fake? I’m sorry, I missed something.

    • aseemrastogi2

      He was just remembering the times spent with family and friends on the portico :).

      • Oh okay. I went back and red it and I think what threw me was “the cherry on the cake.” I wasn’t sure if it was all happening on top of a cake (fantasy).

  3. And the atmosphere is filled with fun and gaiety. radiates a warm positive vibe.

    • aseemrastogi2

      Yes Kalpana, the fun and games had with family and friends on a lovely holiday sitting in the balcony is something which cannot be easily replaced. It just radiates a beautiful feeling :).

  4. Dear Aseem,

    Sounds like a nice gathering, particularly as we have frigid temperatures today.



  5. Exactly the kind of memories I’d expect on the portico. Lovely.

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