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Five Sentence Fiction: Abandon

Abandoned House

Abandoned House


“It looks as though that house has been abandoned since quite a long while.”

Their group had been trekking through the jungle when they came across a dilapidated house in the middle of nowhere. Tired from the day’s heat, they decided to rest for a while.

As it started to get dark, they began to hear strange noises which became louder with time. When they realized that sheltering themselves in the house wouldn’t be safe anymore, they began to run for their lives away from an unseen enemy.

Written for Five Sentence Fiction Prompt: Abandon. Read the other entries here.

Linking to NaBloPoMo (National Blog Post Month – January) – My post no 14 for this month.

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  1. That’s the reason I never seek shelter in abandoned houses.

  2. Interesting. That house sure seems spooky! 😀

  3. creeepy!! Well written though 🙂

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