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Five Sentence Fiction – Faith

Offering to God..

Offering to God..


His only aim while working at Lenus Ltd was to travel abroad to a client location and earn as much as he could.

More than seeing the world, he knew that through this he would fulfill his primary aim of making and saving lots of money and help in treating his unwell mother. She had been diagnosed with cancer and the treatment required money which his family members tried to provide unsuccessfully.

When everything failed, he decided to go to the nearby temple to pay his obeisance to god and take the blessings.

He had heard that whoever came to the temple with faith, warmth and love in his heart, his visa was successfully processed and he went abroad to the location he wished for.

Written for Five Sentence Fiction Prompt: Offering. Read the other entries here.

Linking to NaBloPoMo (National Blog Post Month – January) – My post no 9 for this month.

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  1. It’s a very encouraging story.

  2. sometimes its best to surrender to faith 🙂
    Well written!

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