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100 word fiction: Garden #AtoZChallenge

Their walk in the garden..

Their walk in the garden..

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“We need to put an urgent stop to this. It’s not right for us to go on as our kids aren’t happy.”

While one was going through a painful divorce, the other had lost his partner to a painful death due to cancer. Both longed for unconditional love and care. What started off as a chance meeting in the court moved on to regular walks in the garden hand in hand all day. They discussed their happiness, their sadness, their dreams and more.

But as soon as their kids found out their story, their dream world was shattered to pieces.

I am participating in the A to Z challenge in April  and the theme I have chosen is Micro-fiction

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9 Comments

  1. Archie

    oh! sad…
    very well expressed Aseem… guess this is a reality of many people…

  2. Well written.
    Life puts us in difficult situations and each one has to find their own support through it..
    @yenforblue from
    Spice of Life!

  3. In 100 word, two life are described .
    Sadistic.

    @dixita011 from
    Cafenined words

  4. Right love. Wrong time 🙁

  5. Oh that’s so sad! Did they decide to sacrifice for their kids? 🙁

  6. Sad! A second chance at love would have been nice! For some reason I can’t put my finger on…I felt it was a gay couple!

  7. Oh.. how sad, why children becoming so unsympathetic ? It’s a fiction no ?

  8. May be the children should have understood. Well written 🙂

  9. richajindal

    Life teaches you to make choices some very difficult ones.

    Richa

    http://richajindal.com/eating-habits/
    http://jindalpackers.com/blog/transportation-network/

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