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100 word fiction: Love in the kitchen..

Love in the kitchen..

Love in the kitchen..

PHOTO PROMPT -© Raina Ng

They always loved cooking different cuisines together. While Ronnie ensured that the chopping was properly done, Amanda concentrated on the cooking.

“Hey, can you hold this vessel for a while?”

“But I want to hold you.” Ronnie looked at Amanda with a naughty grin.

For them, spending time in the kitchen was an extension of expressing their love for each other.

Amanda loved decorating the kitchen with teak wood cabinets, vases of different sizes and colours and white hanging lamps. For her, a fresh and welcoming kitchen always gave the impression of a fresh and welcoming home with delightful people.

Written for the photo prompt and you can read the other entries here.

Linking to NaBloPoMo (National Blog Post Month – June – My post no 5 for this month.

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16 Comments

  1. Nice story about how cooking is a way of expressing love.

    • aseemrastogi2

      Surely believe, that love and cooking go hand in hand. Nice to know you liked it :).

  2. “But I want to hold you”…I loved that line….just felt so right and I could see a couple cooking in the kitchen together and the look he’d give her and the smile she’d return and that love between them. Enjoyed this!

  3. I almost felt like I was in the kitchen with them. Good work!

    • aseemrastogi2

      Thanks Thomas :). Good to know I was able to make you feel that way. I guess making the readers visualize is one of the biggest challenges for a writer :D.

  4. Amanda and Ronnie are a perfect couple. Cooking their food and strengthening their relationship. well written story.

    • aseemrastogi2

      True Kalpana. Cooking together is a beautiful feeling for people in love. Nice to know you liked it :).

  5. Lovely character descriptions 🙂 Sounds like they are having fun.

    • aseemrastogi2

      They truly are having fun, Vinay :). Cooking together is delightful and fun for people in love :D.

  6. Dear Aseem

    To many food is love. Nicely expressed in your story.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

    • aseemrastogi2

      Thanks Rochelle. Food is surely the best way to someone’s heart :D.

  7. The best way to anyone’s heart is food. Nicely written

    • aseemrastogi2

      Thanks Deepa. Truly, food is the spice of life as they say :). Welcome to my blog :D.

  8. Nice, simple tale well told. The closeness/comfort of the these two is apparent from the conversation and actions youve written. Nice job.

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